Tuesday, April 12, 2011

J is for Joseph’s Star Verse - Never Sorry (A-Z Challenge - Letter J)

Love
Means Never
Having To Say You’re


Sorry for what you have done
Sorry for not being there

Having To Never
Because You’re
Loved

This form is called the Joseph's Star by Christina R Jussaume.
This poem has no rhyme, and is written according to
syllables of 1, 3, 5, 7, 7, 5, 3, and 1.

© Lisa N ~ 4/03/11

8 comments:

  1. Love finding new forms of poetry! never heard of this.

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  2. Never heard of this before, but I like playing with my syllables, so I think I'll give this a try.

    :-)

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  3. That's great, love the form. I'll have to give it a try sometime but I do love to rhyme so it may be hard:-)




    http://upinthecosmos.blogspot.com/2011/04/j-is-for-juxtaposition.html

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  4. I so agree... love means never having to say you're sorry... how perfectly it conveys so many meanings..

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  5. Great! It's more like a haiku in its style.

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  6. Thanks for the new style. Love is such an interesting beast :)

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  7. Nice take on the prompt plus a new form of poetry to try - win win situation! :-)

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  8. Nice one Lisa !
    As awlays it is a pleasure to read your work... OOO and thanks for the new form to try !!
    AWESOME !!
    JL&B

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