Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Darkness and Light - NaPoWriMo #6

The sky is dark before me
It matches my mood
Depressed
Alone

Aware
Confident
Positive words like light
The day dawns bright ahead

© Lisa N ~ 4/6/2011

8 comments:

  1. "Positive words like light," and "the day dawns bright ahead," very nice Lisa.

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  2. Great job I really like this poem and the change that occurs.

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  3. I like the way you taper down the depression and the light opens up to positive words.
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  4. It's imperative that we all look for the bright spot in the dark. Your poem makes me cherish sunrises even more.

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  5. Turning the dark into light ... uplifting and rewarding. :-)

    What is this form of poetry called?

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  6. I love the contrast of dark and light in this piece. Your poem is uplifting and wonderful in the second stanza. Beautiful poem here.

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  7. OOO Lisa...
    you dont know how glad we are that you did this one, it helped open a well for us today, and we once again thank you.
    Beauty runs deep in you my friend.
    Enjoy

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