NaPoWriMo #10
Write a poem about the one/all of the 7 sins that only
contains seven words per line
contains seven words per line
Lust ~ having an intense desire or need
Gluttony – an excess eating or drinking deed
Greed – reprehensible sensitivity and unwilling to accede
Laziness – disinclined to move with any speed
Wrath – vengeful anger, unwillingness to concede
Envy – resenting advantage of other to succeed
Pride – state of being proud can exceed
posted at http://www.napowrimo.net/
© Lisa N ~ 4/10/2011
This is cool the way you composed the seven sins with seven words per line and the ending of each line so unique, and every word rhymes beautifully. I think this is my favorite, thus far. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWow! This is really cool!
ReplyDeleteI really like the last word in each line. That is awesome and makes it very powerful. Cool I like it!
ReplyDeleteSpot on Lisa !!
ReplyDeleteJL&B