Sunday, March 27, 2011

Ripples on Ice


Through the eyes of my mind
I do but see
Ripples of moisture
On the ice it must be

The layers of ice
Reflect back the light
Rings like an oak tree
A magnificient sight

The droplets they splash
Sparkle bright in the sun
That’s my guess for this challenge
Oh boy this was fun

© Lisa Northrup ~ 3/27/2011

7 comments:

  1. Great! I love this one, especially the tongue in cheek ending.

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  2. Love the joyous finish-tone of this.

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  3. I love how you related the ripples of ice like rings in an oak tree. Beautiful imagery.

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  4. You're right, Lisa - this was fun! Thanks for the smile! Amy

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  5. Yep, we like the oak tree part too, lovely poem Lisa, Great One Shot !
    JL&B
    Ps Dodge Writes Prompt will be up in a few moments !
    ENJOY

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  6. Great One Shot! Lisa...It was fun :)

    ♥ ஆ ~.^

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