Tuesday, April 12, 2011

J is for Joseph’s Star Verse - Never Sorry (A-Z Challenge - Letter J)

Love
Means Never
Having To Say You’re

Sorry for what you have done
Sorry for not being there

Having To Never
Because You’re
Loved

This form is called the Joseph's Star by Christina R Jussaume.
This poem has no rhyme, and is written according to
syllables of 1, 3, 5, 7, 7, 5, 3, and 1.

© Lisa N ~ 4/03/11
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8 comments:

  1. LiApril 12, 2011 at 3:29 AM

    Love finding new forms of poetry! never heard of this.

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  2. Misha GerrickApril 12, 2011 at 3:55 AM

    Never heard of this before, but I like playing with my syllables, so I think I'll give this a try.

    :-)

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  3. UnknownApril 12, 2011 at 5:48 AM

    That's great, love the form. I'll have to give it a try sometime but I do love to rhyme so it may be hard:-)




    http://upinthecosmos.blogspot.com/2011/04/j-is-for-juxtaposition.html

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  4. ererApril 12, 2011 at 5:55 AM

    I so agree... love means never having to say you're sorry... how perfectly it conveys so many meanings..

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  5. Laura EnoApril 12, 2011 at 6:09 AM

    Great! It's more like a haiku in its style.

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  6. Author Joshua HoytApril 12, 2011 at 7:11 AM

    Thanks for the new style. Love is such an interesting beast :)

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  7. AnonymousApril 13, 2011 at 6:33 AM

    Nice take on the prompt plus a new form of poetry to try - win win situation! :-)

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  8. JL DodgeApril 13, 2011 at 10:16 PM

    Nice one Lisa !
    As awlays it is a pleasure to read your work... OOO and thanks for the new form to try !!
    AWESOME !!
    JL&B

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