Thursday, April 28, 2011

Friday Flash 55

When Is It Enough?

When 55 is a struggle to post
and the words just won't come out.

When all you want to do is cry
but instead you decide to shout.

When doing what is perceived as right
is an expecation that is unfair

When treating others well despite
it appears no one really cares.

9 comments:

  1. keep treating others right...and its ok to shout at times, i usually go downstairs so i dont scare anyone..

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  2. When doing what is perceived as right
    is an expecation that is unfair!!

    I know this one well.. despite all, keep treating everyone well, it all comes back with time!

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  3. Lisa...
    No anxiety should ever be manifested when it comes to 55's.
    It's supposed to be fun.
    A short story...A Short short story, thats all!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  4. It may not show, but forbearance really does reap rewards.

    - Alice

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  5. When treating others well despite
    it appears no one really cares.

    This is a feeling I understand

    A good 55 about 55


    that is all

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  6. Great rhyme! I care...there is always someone out there that does. I am glad the words finally flowed for you.

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  7. Shouting can be therapuetic as long as it's not directed at anyone in particular. And as for treating others well, maybe it shouldn't matter so much if otehrs don't care as long as you care?

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  8. There is so much pressure when trying to please the Master. Good work, you did enough.

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