What
I’m Sick?
We All Are?
Epidemic?
This Just Cannot Be
I received all the shots
I took every precaution
This just cannot be happening
Especially not to me today
I just don’t have time to be sick like this
Caused by someone who didn’t vaccinate
They thought didn’t need to do it
Well now that a fine decision
Their careless disregarding
Made other people sick
What do we do now?
Epidemic
Too Late Now
Crisis
Death
E is for Etheree Form.
It consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.
It can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.
posted at http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/
posted at http://onesingleimpression.blogspot.com/2011/04/prompt-162-epidemic.html
© Lisa N. ~ 4/6/11
Cool I love following your blog and learning more about poetry. Maybe if I read long enough I'll actually write my own :)
ReplyDeleteVery interesting poetic form. So you wrote two etherees back to back, right? How fun. That must have been a big challenge.
ReplyDeleteLove your poetry!
ReplyDeleteWow...I love it and I'm embarrased to say, before today I had never heard of Etheree Form. Not only does the poem sound amazing, it looks amazing too!!I’m now following you on GFC and I hope you have a chance to check out my blog!
ReplyDeleteMonica
http://oldermommystillyummy.blogspot.com/
I never get flu shots, and am happy with my decision.
ReplyDeleteBut death.... now that may make me think twice.
Hope you are well!
xo
Cool! I've never heard of this type of poem! Stopping by to visit my fellow Lisa's in the A-Z challenge :)
ReplyDeleteGreat way to do the E Lisa... never heard of the form either, gonna have to try it now !
ReplyDeleteJL&B
Fascinating form, thanks for sharing. Wonderfully written.
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