Sunday, September 4, 2011

Stuck on the Bijou - Magpie




Stuck in the sand
This is how we just were
Our wheels dug in
Escape did not occur

Stranded on the Bijou
Help coming our way
A long hike to the road
Wasn't the plan for the day

We're delivered back home
Then return with a tow
Big Brother Excursion
Gives the Jeep a show

© Lisa N. ~ 09/04/2011

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7 comments:

  1. Brian MillerSeptember 5, 2011 at 6:21 AM

    been there...got stuck in the sand at the beach once and just about rested the car on its frame...we did get out though...and nice on the excursion...

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  2. ReflectionsSeptember 5, 2011 at 8:07 AM

    Wonderful piece, making lighter of the dismal darkness of being stuck. momentary pauses.

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  3. laurie kolpSeptember 5, 2011 at 10:45 AM

    Sometimes things don't go as planned but they can still be okay.

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  4. Chronicles of IllusionsSeptember 8, 2011 at 12:40 AM

    i like where you went with this poem

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  5. TrellissimoSeptember 8, 2011 at 7:07 AM

    A helping hand is always good...

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  6. ShonEjaiSeptember 9, 2011 at 4:46 PM

    Very nice!

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  7. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarrySeptember 10, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    profound.

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