Sunday, May 8, 2011

I Love You Because

I
Love You
Because You Make Me
Better Than I Was Alone
Together We Are Better
I’m Grateful That You
Love Me
Too

This form is called the Joseph's Star with syllables of 1, 3, 5, 7, 7, 5, 3, 1.
Posted at http://onesingleimpression.blogspot.com/2011/05/prompt-167-love.html
© Lisa N ~ 5/8/2011
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4 comments:

  1. JimMay 9, 2011 at 12:14 AM

    Lisa, your Josheph's Star looks like a fun poem to write. You did it well with our prompt.

    I
    am real glad
    that you showed me it
    Joseph's Star I think will fit
    my creative needs of form
    for you I am glad
    here we met
    now
    ..
    (I get goofy after midnight.)
    ..

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  2. JingleMay 9, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    love makes one's life complete,
    true,
    well said.

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  3. The Write GirlMay 9, 2011 at 6:38 PM

    Such gentle, refreshing, and sweet love.

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  4. AnonymousMay 10, 2011 at 8:52 PM

    The loving bears are perfect with your love verse.

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