Sunday, May 22, 2011

"I" 160

I
Perceive
many things
I
Believe
therefore you see
I
Achieve
then wait patiently until
I
Receive

I
Inquire
about this world
I
Aspire
to great heights
I
Inspire
others until ultimately
I
Acquire

9 comments:

  1. Thanks for playing, Lisa. And for the heavy count admission. A 160 is tough to keep to 160. I hate when I get done with one and I am at 159 or 161 and have to figure some way to make it work. But that's the challenge. Keep coming back.

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  2. Good job with that challenge. Who knew that "I" could be so decorative. :)

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  3. very pretty use of word, it feels delicate :)

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  4. I like the sentiment of it. It is very delicate, but thought provoking. Very well written and flowing.

    Sara

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  5. Well Done ! Im not sure I could pull this one off ! LOL
    ENJOY
    JL&B

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  6. how is everything?
    hope to see you active again.


    Welcome join poetry potluck week 37 today,

    Share your poetry, enjoy the spotlight.

    Bless your MondaY!

    As always, your poetry is sunshine to us!

    XOXOX

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