Monday, June 6, 2011

Eye Wonder What You See

Look deep into my eye
And tell me what you see
Dark black spreads out
Into a blue sea

Like looking at the earth
From high up in the sky
Or maybe a crater
Making the dirt fly

Look deep into my eye
And tell me what you see
Your imagination wanders
Wondering what it may be

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8 comments:

  1. UnknownJune 7, 2011 at 6:04 AM

    Ohhh so good.

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  2. LynJune 7, 2011 at 9:42 AM

    Looking deeply, I see talent..not such a big surprise!

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  3. Margaret PangertJune 7, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    Beautiful, Lisa! Looking into your eye, I see images that express your soul: dark black spreading into a blue sea, looking down at the earth or into a crater. The eye as a model of your world. Love it! Ƹ̴Ӂ̴Ʒ

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  4. HelenJune 7, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    One of my favorites this week ........

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  5. Sioux RoslawskiJune 7, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    I liked the repetition between the first and third stanza...Also the phrase "dark black spreads out."

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  6. Henry ClemmonsJune 8, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    Very good. Great ue of words. None wasted all focused on ur purpose.

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  7. Tumblewords:June 8, 2011 at 9:04 PM

    Beautiful, indeed! Love the flow and rhythm.

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  8. AnonymousJune 10, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    Wonderful job

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