tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222673937261175089.post8075462366033712196..comments2023-11-04T23:24:08.031-06:00Comments on Inspired by Lisa: Triolet – I Doubt MyselfLisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14287714494263781046noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222673937261175089.post-76782773677788108852011-03-08T02:38:57.730-07:002011-03-08T02:38:57.730-07:00You dod a sterling job, it's gunny how we doub...You dod a sterling job, it's gunny how we doubt ourselves continually!! Triolet form is great here, strong refrains the only notes on form are on the iambs<br /><br />*faith in me gets in the way* has one stress too little (don't count syllables count stresses and could be changed to my faith in me gets in the way<br /><br />Also my confidence I omit...could be chants ti<br /><br />No confidence have I in lit? Or a similar line?<br /><br />Otherwise bravo! I hope to see you next week!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222673937261175089.post-25609545764312969762011-03-08T00:15:04.627-07:002011-03-08T00:15:04.627-07:00Belief is everything and your belief has present a...Belief is everything and your belief has present a beautiful and thoughtful write..truly enjoyed it...thank you...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222673937261175089.post-30247403826881385912011-03-07T21:47:26.246-07:002011-03-07T21:47:26.246-07:00I have not seen anyone do a Triolet in a while you...I have not seen anyone do a Triolet in a while you did wonderful on this one!!!Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.com